Thanks Bina
 for your generous approval
Bijaya

To: one BG
nice thoughts on twilight
brevity said it all

from another BG :)

Thanks Julia
 For that sweet comment
Bijaya

Hi Bijaya,
Very nice presentation - short and sweet!

Thanks Dsampath

For being so appreciative
Bijaya

no
 chanchal
not yet fully in banaprastha.
but the shadow comes often
The day is not very far
So trying to acclimatize to the thought
thanks for the comment.

dear bijaya,
short
sweet
soulful
sensible....

How is this one?

THE TWILIGHT SONG

At the dawn of my life

Those who brought music to my mind

One by one they are fading

Behind the evening shadows.

Along the way

Many are coming and going

I am sitting all alone by its side.

Those who have left

Are coming back and crowding

At the door of my dreams

My past pains

Are seeking in their single strings

The tunes they lost long ago.

Hours pass after hours

I am counting the silent sounds of the beads

Transcreation of the love song – Jara bihan-belay gan enechhilo – composed by Rabindranath Tagore on 3^rd November, 1940, a few months before his death.

Great poem!

Dear Bijaya
What happened? Thinking Of Vanaprastha?...
Lovely expression of Twilight Zone ...

regards
Chanchal